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Posted by KIIIA on Sat Oct 23rd at 4:14pm 2004

So , here is my new WIP project.

criticism or comments?





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Posted by Cassius on Sat Oct 23rd at 4:32pm 2004

Dear KIIIA,

How is it possible to map as fast as you do?

Sincerely,

Cassius.

P.S. I like this new one, but the weird-ass metal beam thing in the last shot has got to go.





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Posted by Spartan on Sat Oct 23rd at 4:34pm 2004

Looks really nice. You used the term WIP though and I only hear people say that when they show off a model. I also thought this was a map for Unreal 2K4 when I first looked at the pics. So what game/mod is it for.

Edit: never mind its for Q3.





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Posted by fraggard on Sat Oct 23rd at 5:05pm 2004

I don't play Q3A much but a few things I can see visually

-Your lights don't match the rest of the architecture. They look too detailed TBH.
-What cassius said about that support thing
-Yellow jump pads don't match the Blue-and-Gray theme you have going on.

Considering that my Q3A knowledge is very limited, feel free to ignore :/





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Posted by Campaignjunkie on Sat Oct 23rd at 7:26pm 2004

I think you should make the lighting match the cartoony style - high contrast or flat. And that realistic metal support thing has to go, yes. Might want to make the black outlines a bit thicker to emphasize it more - as it is, I have to kind of squint to see them.
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Posted by Hugh on Sat Oct 23rd at 8:12pm 2004

Yeah, definitely get rid of that metal thingy. The door in the 2nd pic I like, very nice. [addsig]



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Posted by Orpheus on Sat Oct 23rd at 8:17pm 2004

from the angle of the shot, you cannot truly say the metal thingy must go, all you can truthfully say is it looks odd and might not belong..

personally, i don't like the blue lights.. it clashes with the attempted theme IMO..

course, i am gonna shut up now, before this map comes up missing too

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Posted by Tracer Bullet on Sun Oct 24th at 7:43am 2004

I agree that the metal strut has to go, but I rather like the yellow jump pads. I think the jarring clash between them and the rest of the map adds to the cartoony theme and additionaly makes them obveous so that players will not overlook them. Otherwise I agree with everyone else. [addsig]



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Posted by Gwil on Sun Oct 24th at 1:03pm 2004

e-cel textures? they certainly look like it

definately, do something about the metal support - without pulling punches, it looks absolutely horrid and out of place.

the jump pads do look nice, but if i recally correctly wont they bounce people up, and away from the pad rather than straight up - im not sure if its a setting on the bounce pads, but it looks a little odd when considering how the rest of the q3a jump pads are set up


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Posted by KIIIA on Thu Oct 28th at 6:34pm 2004

Some new WIP stuff:


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Posted by Orpheus on Thu Oct 28th at 6:38pm 2004

i just love, clean sharp edged textures.. they are a bitch to get right sometimes, but they look nice when you do..

nice screens

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Posted by ReNo on Thu Oct 28th at 8:00pm 2004

Loving that hanging blue enery thingy, looks uber cool Got a bit of a texture misalignment on it though, but perhaps thats impossible to avoid (I imagine it could be if animated). Very nice architecture all round and the cel-shading is coming off much better than I had expected.
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Posted by MisterBister on Thu Oct 28th at 8:20pm 2004

Very unique. I have never seen anything like it. Really nice indeed.




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Posted by G.Ballblue on Thu Oct 28th at 8:49pm 2004

Hmmmm... the window in your second new screen looks like Q2 glass [addsig]



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Posted by KIIIA on Sat Nov 13th at 6:19pm 2004

Neue WIP Pics:


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Posted by KungFuSquirrel on Sat Nov 13th at 6:36pm 2004

Looks sweet. Nice to see more Q3 stuff around here. Now if only Lep hadn't deleted that section hehe

Very nice architectural work all around. I'd love to see more curves, personally, but nothing wrong with what you've got so far [addsig]



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Posted by Cassius on Sun Nov 14th at 6:22am 2004

LOOKIN SHARP BUDDY BOY [addsig]



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Posted by ReNo on Sun Nov 14th at 12:57pm 2004

Lovely - only complaint would be that the texture on that central pillar hasn't wrapped particularly well leaving an ugly seam. While you might not be able to do anything about that with the current pillar design, you could consider putting one or two thing metal supports up it at points, allowing you to hide the seam behind them.

Anyway, love the room design, love the lighting, and love the textures (though that floor texture is in danger of being overused in this area, perhaps put a different one on the lowest level floor?)

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Posted by KIIIA on Sun Nov 28th at 7:35pm 2004

Done a new unplaned room over the WE:


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C&C





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Posted by Cassius on Sun Nov 28th at 7:38pm 2004

I don't think you're taking our thoughts about the realistic metal beam thing to heart...




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