I looked over the map. considering the level of cooperation, it was about the quality i expected.
i have nothing positive to say, but considering i also have nothing negative to say, count your blessings.
the map is what i would expect from an entry level mapper, your basic "maze" type of setting, one not very conducive with HLDM play.
the lighting was poor at best.
my chief complaint was the incredible process just to download the thing. it was horrible. i suggest another host cause this one reeks. i almost gave up after the 4th or 5th forwarded page. 
if you want a better critique, i suggest you sweet talk someone else cause mine would not be favorable to your... disposition.
i saw no outright glaring errors. i do feel with a bit of restructuring the map could play well, but in its current form, i do not see it doing very well in any credible review sites.
i give it a 6/10.. and thats generous.
one final suggestion, you may take it or leave it. until you open yourself to criticism, and stop informing people what you will not do, your maps will prolly not advance much beyond this stage. shame to cause i see skills yet untapped. it would be a shame if you failed to humble yourself to your peers. you will find that your friends are not the ones telling you what you would like to hear.
i've said my piece, please do not ask for clarification.
/ 2 cents
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