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Posted by Rossi on Sun Dec 19th at 3:05pm 2004

Hi guys this is my first map

I would appreciate comments and constructive critique

You can try the map on our server (UK Based) @ 82.136.20.15:27060

Its about 70% done and requires more decoration.

Many thanks.





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Posted by Cassius on Sun Dec 19th at 8:01pm 2004

The outside especially looks pretty original, but I don't think it's very polished yet, as you say. What's with the huge strip of yellow light?



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Posted by G.Ballblue on Sun Dec 19th at 8:40pm 2004

As Cassius said, the outside looks original, but not polished that much. The indoor looks like it should be a little more claustrophobic -- add more office cubicles. The ceiling height is fine, but I'd figure there should be more junk to walk around in an office building [addsig]



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Posted by Rossi on Sun Dec 19th at 9:28pm 2004

Thanks guys.

I've just compiled beta4 so I'll test it and post it up. The yellow light was the sun, it was filtered through the other buildings. Thats changed now.

I've added the ability to disable the lighting in the building by shooting transformer boxes outside. Also changed the lighting slightly to be more subtle.





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Posted by Gwil on Tue Dec 21st at 5:00pm 2004

Download link doesnt work, tried to have a look round but i get a 404 at yours hosts site
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Posted by TMA-2 on Sun Dec 19th at 11:10pm 2004

That looks really awesome! Ditto on the lighting in screen 4, though. The contrast is so sharp it looks like a misaligned texture. Everything else looks really nice, though, like a multi-story cs_office. I'll check it out soon.



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Posted by Forceflow on Sun Dec 19th at 8:22pm 2004

Lighting on #4 looks wierd.



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Posted by Desert Gunner on Sun Dec 19th at 9:34pm 2004

From looking at the pics it looks great!!!! I do agree with Forceflow that the lighting in pic #4 looks wierd.



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Posted by Paladin[NL] on Mon Dec 20th at 12:11pm 2004

I don't find it that attractive, the rooms are boxy(note: this is a office complex so box rooms shouldn't be bad, but there is nothing really that spices the overal look up) the outside area is somewhat weird(#4 lighting as sad before) and the outside buildings seem to stop suddenly at the upper windows(#3), first there is a window, then there is nothing, no border or such. <br>With some more thinking into the design this could be a very nice remake, but it's still missing some spark.



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Posted by Blue on Mon Dec 20th at 6:54pm 2004

Stfu paladin. <br>This map looks great! just fix the lighting and add more details and it could be my favorite cs map!




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