This is my possible competition map, depending on time limits, critiques given below and of course if getting feedback like this is allowed 
If anyone wants to test this please drop me a PM and I'll send you a link. Thanks!
Mainly after visual looks (especially how it fares FPS wise on people's computer) and general atmosphere; there's still some things to be built so a few dead ends, unlit and empty rooms, etc...
The man himself, mapping? 
In any case, the only suggestion I can give offhand is get a darker rock texture/make the trim between metal and rock more stark, as the lack of contrast between the two isn't so nice looking, especially in the first picture.
*rubs hands together*
let the games begin 
Though the 1st pic has had a few changes such as more contrast since taking it, I'll update it. Oh, and ignore the FPS indicator in the 2nd pic, not so bad any more 
W00t, thanks for the critique 
First and foremost, like I said the layout hasn't been completed yet and I didn't expect you to really get anywhere (quickly, or at all!) without noclip. Also there were 'HOM' effects as some areas were still cordoned off.
As far as I'm aware, doorways are as wide as Valve's, but I'll stick in some more clip brushes to help you get around. And I'll go about sorting out some of those ugly lights and corridors post haste.
The force field which you said you couldn't work out uses that 'gizmo' to power it, as seen in the latter parts of the single player game. I'm sure once someone fries you with one of the energy balls or you get stuck on the RPG ledge you'll figure it out
Those damn plants growing on the ground, I can't get rid of them as they automatically appear with that ground texture! I'll do something with the water though, someone else said they couldn't really see it.
Did you see the dropship landing at all?
And Cassius, where in particular did you think the rocks looked a bit jagged, around the water or just everywhere?
Anyway, thanks a lot for the critique, lots of good feedback to work on I guess the texture limit will bother some people, but hey, I've used more than Valve did in most of their later single player levels and am personally happy with it!
Well I've been round the map and such quite a few times (not this version though, I'll have to be sent it as HL2 looks crappy and shiney on nVidia cards) The rock texture seemed fine to me, maybe its the screenshots that don't enhance it, you know how it is- taking pictures of dark levels is always very hard but ingame its fine because your in the environment.
The only thing I think it needs are those minute details that seem to be scattered throughout the whole of HL2. Things like mini grates with wires behind them and stuff. Also I think maybe the use of more combine props is in order... I noticed a lack of iddy biddy props when I played the map ages ago, not sure if thats changed.
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i clipped around everywhere, i think i saw the entire map. i hope i did. but in all fairness, if i reached an area that had no new complaints, i didn't take any screenshots of it. i can go back and get more if you like though???
as i said, my goal wasn't to gripe, far from it really. this being my first for 2005 it was kinda hard because i began to realize, "is my machine doing that?" i saw funny blob reflections in some of the surfaces, but none of the screenshots showed them so i ignored them as inconsequential.
as for the plant, i wanted more, not less sorry if i sounded to the contrary.
be good
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[addsig] *blushes*
stop, you're embarrassing me.
*slips myrk a fiver*
[addsig]I like the feel of it, looks really good in most parts. Orph's pics did show some pretty plain areas that could be detailed out alot more.
We're a lonely group trying to do combine themes 
hardly no textures and props the size of three story buildings don't make it easy.
I don't care for that floor texture, the multi colored one, but that personal taste.
The combine forcefield... the support brackets are floating in the air... you should extend that wall so they are flush to it.
without running around in it thats all i can say for my 2cents. can't wait to see the final. GJ
I had a run through and it looks pretty good so far. I got a stalkyard vibe from it, which is a good thing. The fast speed, flow, tons of overlooks, and the way the map seems to double back on itself will make for great games. The completed areas looked rather nice as well. Additional stuff:
-I would be careful about that generator that spits out energy balls. It spits out balls too fast and too often, and any jerkoff can just sit there firing a constant stream of them all over the place. If they are efficient enough they could even lag the server. It will certainly make moving through that area difficult because you always have to be wary of a stray disintegration.
-The hallways looked terrible. Obviously the map is still under construction and those areas will probably be the last to be touched, but they really need more detail. Perhaps you could use the shield texture as a sort of overhead window and show some rockwork above them.
-I can get rather low FPS for many of the big rooms due to high swap buffers. This is probably because my graphics card doesn't like the combine refracting windows or maybe just because of the fog. Personally I'd ditch the fog (if its the cause) and use the gained framerates to add more brush detail to the rooms.
-Throw some of those plastic tubes into some areas to add some variety. You could have a room with a big open rock area and have tubes snaking up into the distance, like it's sending stuff to a combine facility above.
-I just today made two prefabs that you might be interested in. They are meant for combine control rooms in normal buildings, but you could probably find a use for them. First is a gun rack from the game and the second is based on what I think were supposed to be manhack storage/dispenser units that were in one of the buildings in Water Hazard. They aren't completely release-worthy yet as they need more testing, but if you want them I can give you a download link.
All in all this looks like the beginnings of a great map.
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Now this is why I hired you. Hit me with those prefabs baby!
Thanks for the feedback, and don't worry, the corridors are certainly being worked on and more detail being added. The swapbuffers I believe are actually being caused by the rocks- apparently they've been compiled with that $lightmappedgeneric or whatever teh ev1l is- and I need the fog for the cavern effect, the same thing means the rocks won't ever look fully dark :/
