Here's my contribution to Valve's DM contest. Hope you enjoy it.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by ReNo on Sun Jan 16th at 4:15am 2005

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Posted by ReNo on Sun Jan 16th at 4:15am 2005
I think with that name you have sealed your map's fate - if it did win
a position I guess they would force you to change it
The screenshots
look ok but nothing special, particularly in the lighting department.
The second shot especially looks very flatly lit, which does it no
favours, and the red coloured brushwork looks awkward to me.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by DrGlass on Sun Jan 16th at 6:31am 2005

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Posted by DrGlass on Sun Jan 16th at 6:31am 2005
I agree about the name. You have too many lights that are the same color and brightness. Shadows arn't always bad.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by Cassius on Sun Jan 16th at 6:40am 2005
Posted by Cassius on Sun Jan 16th at 6:40am 2005
Except for your crazy lighting, the first shot looks good. Don't know what happened with the rest.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by Myrk- on Sun Jan 16th at 12:22pm 2005

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Posted by Myrk- on Sun Jan 16th at 12:22pm 2005
The lighting is bleeding everywhere! Turn your bounce value down.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by habboi on Sun Jan 16th at 2:13pm 2005
Posted by habboi on Sun Jan 16th at 2:13pm 2005
Full bright?
The tunnel looks nice and round which is good and if you add more to your map then it will be great fun.
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by dibz on Sun Jan 16th at 2:51pm 2005
Posted by dibz on Sun Jan 16th at 2:51pm 2005
right cassius wots ur prob wiv habboi, it seems there is sum conflict but
i do not know why. Sorry that that bit wosnt bout map, but neways it
looks good, cept the name is terrible if you're gonna release it for
the DM contest.
Good luck and may the best mapper win eh
Good luck and may the best mapper win eh
Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by Myrk- on Sun Jan 16th at 2:54pm 2005

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Posted by Myrk- on Sun Jan 16th at 2:54pm 2005
LOL habboi you fewl, it's not fullbright at all. You can tell quite easily because it has light spots etc. I think theres just too much generic light rather than light spots and bursts, which create contrast. Perhaps remove the light at the top of the tunnel?
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by habboi on Sun Jan 16th at 2:59pm 2005
Posted by habboi on Sun Jan 16th at 2:59pm 2005
Sorry and your right!
My monitor is quite bright so it was an easy mistake!
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by Random on Sun Jan 16th at 7:33am 2005
Posted by Random on Sun Jan 16th at 7:33am 2005
Looks awesome from the screens.
Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by pepper on Sun Jan 16th at 3:37pm 2005
Posted by pepper on Sun Jan 16th at 3:37pm 2005
Looks like the london underground!!
Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by viper5k on Mon Jan 31st at 10:15am 2005
Posted by viper5k on Mon Jan 31st at 10:15am 2005
Nice better then my brothers subway but hes got a kickass warehouse in his
Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by the 1 the only 2 on Sat Mar 12th at 7:17pm 2005

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Posted by the 1 the only 2 on Sat Mar 12th at 7:17pm 2005
It look's very sneaky......very.....very sneaky. a bit round but still pretty cool. very eye pleasing EYE PLEASING
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Re: dm_tube_dude
Posted by 417 on Wed May 11th at 9:03am 2005
Posted by 417 on Wed May 11th at 9:03am 2005
This map is in our rotation. It has great game play and is quite popular and handles 14+ players. I recommend this map!
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