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Posted by WinterBlows on Thu Jun 9th at 1:23pm 2005

This is the firsth map that I am publishing so feedback on it would be welcome.

DL the map at http://gamerzone.pri.ee/aim_para.rar

It is supposed to be an only-machinegun map. It is quite small too.

So gimme feedback <img src=" SRC="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif"> Ill finish the map tomorrow.




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Posted by Addicted to Morphine on Thu Jun 9th at 1:27pm 2005

Uploading some screenshots would be helpful. People usually decide whether or not they'll download the map by looking at the screenshots.




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Posted by WinterBlows on Thu Jun 9th at 1:41pm 2005

kk i uploaded two screens.

*EDIT*

i also added some props and decals.


critics please.




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Posted by $loth on Thu Jun 9th at 9:39pm 2005

make it bigger, more than some props and brushes inside a square box, make it more interesting, look up renos tutorial on displacements, make it into a small canyon if you will. Instead of those barrels why not have some jagged rocks, there are some in the models section of hammer. Don't make it look plain and boxy, have vertical and horizontal constrast. If you have some fps still left over why not add some rain and puddles?




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Posted by habboi on Fri Jun 10th at 10:24am 2005

Yeah listen to $loph because thats all you can do to improve it.




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Posted by Windows 98 on Fri Jun 10th at 10:55am 2005

Yes, good first map. Even though they are right, it does look kinda dull and boring. I can see you put a lot of time and effort into (I hope) this being your first map. Keep up the good work. Some things you might want to add a 3d skybox, also its a little harshly lit. Put in some lights.



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