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Posted by Finger on Mon Jul 5th at 8:18pm 2004

tis just overcast



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Posted by Finger on Mon Jul 5th at 8:32pm 2004

Argh....I couldn't escape your observation.





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Posted by ReNo on Mon Jul 5th at 8:41pm 2004

Wow, adding in the enviroment does loads for the picture. I'm thoroughly impressed by this mate, definately the best I've seen from you and thats no easy feat!
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Posted by Orpheus on Mon Jul 5th at 8:52pm 2004

? posted by Finger

Argh....I couldn't escape your observation.

far be it for me to correct a master at his trade.. the pic was fine originally bud.

i hope, i didn't overstep :/

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Posted by Finger on Mon Jul 5th at 9:03pm 2004

Thanks . No Orph, I'm glad you pointed that out. It's hard to step back from your own creations, and critique them objectively.



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Posted by Gorbachev on Mon Jul 5th at 9:05pm 2004

I really like the latest, very, very cool. [addsig]



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Posted by Orpheus on Mon Jul 5th at 9:21pm 2004

? posted by Finger
Thanks . No Orph, I'm glad you pointed that out. It's hard to step back from your own creations, and critique them objectively.

ok then, take your lizard/frog and make a second version, just for grins/giggles.

add this stuff:


  • weatherbeaten the rocks, soften the edges a bit.
  • increase the water depth up to the frogs forefoot, make it ripple from the immersion.
  • make it rain, just a bit.. add just a few blurry droplets.
  • add a leaf or two.
  • increase the depth by- adding some fog, between the tail (farthest part of body away) and head (nearest).
  • add moisture (dew drops) to pronged spear.

compare two pics when finished.

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Posted by Ferret on Mon Jul 5th at 10:59pm 2004

The polished look of the frog clashes with the harsh strokes of the environment.



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Posted by Finger on Mon Jul 5th at 11:32pm 2004

True, Ferret. Still very much a WIP, and I'll take Orphs's suggestions into consideration as I polish it out further.



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Posted by Orpheus on Mon Jul 5th at 11:42pm 2004

? posted by Finger
True, Ferret. Still very much a WIP, and I'll take Orphs's suggestions into consideration as I polish it out further.

please do it seperately.. i would hate myself for ruining your frog

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Posted by Finger on Tue Jul 6th at 6:35am 2004

I can't seem to stop poking at it.





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Posted by Crono on Tue Jul 6th at 7:33am 2004

Damn.

This reminds me of some really good artists (amateur) that I'm favorable of: Jullie Dillon and (I don't really know her name because the entire site is in Korean) the chick who runs tatoomcity

Awesome. Simply Awesome ... and bad ass ... but I use that phrase too much.

Now all it needs is a flame mammal of some sort to oppose the lizard ... who has opposable thumbs. [addsig]



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Posted by Orpheus on Tue Jul 6th at 10:42am 2004

i see some of my comments applied

nice..very nice.

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Posted by Orpheus on Tue Jul 6th at 11:13am 2004

Evolution? Perhaps... But, whats next?






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Posted by Crono on Tue Jul 6th at 11:14am 2004

... and you managed to forget the latest one [addsig]



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Posted by Orpheus on Tue Jul 6th at 11:16am 2004

? posted by Crono
... and you managed to forget the latest one

i musta been fixing that, as you replied.. thanx none the less

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Posted by Finger on Tue Jul 6th at 5:10pm 2004

Next? I think just more tightening and rendering...maybe a skewered snark on the end of his spear?



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Posted by ReNo on Tue Jul 6th at 5:13pm 2004

I kinda liked the rocks having more definition as before, though they certainly look more in tune with the style of the creature now. Perhaps you could reach an equilibrium somehow, by making them a little more sharp and defined?

The spear could use a fair bit of tidying but otherwise the creature looks pretty complete to me
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Posted by Finger on Tue Jul 6th at 6:13pm 2004

yeah, I already changed the foremost rock, and one in the background. One was too round, the other, too pointy.




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