Posted by habboi on Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 8:57pm
Dark you have a pipe going through a pilar on the 1st picture
The green sign is stretched, make it smaller!
The third picture has a wall with a wall texture that has wood at the bottom and cement at the top but you made it so there is wood at the bottom and then cement and then wood again! (Hard to explain) i will fix for you later anyway!
[addsig]Posted by Joe-Bob on Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 7:10pm
The 1st shot is thin, although you may be able to get away with it if it's almost never used besides for spawning (think dm_lockdown, behind the shower room).
The 2nd shot look REALLY strange. What's going on down there?
3rd shot, what's going on with the ceiling? I'm very confused with this map.
The 4th shot has a weird hole in the wall that looks significantly different from the rest of the room. Also, I think that wall texture needs stretched or something, the window textures are misaligned and need rotating, and fix that "exit" sign. Abandoned buildings don't just magically have their words flip around.
Last, in the 5th shot, I see that you got the env_sun entity working, but that's about it.
Needs detail, less weird brushwork, etc. Keep mapping!
Posted by Myrk- on Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 5:56pm
1st picture... the one where red light is coming from white lighting fixtures
I think your green light is too bright too. And where are the old broken/not on lights in that room? And is there actually an exit there (even if you can't go through it)
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Posted by habboi on Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 5:15pm
It is in c17 folder as i helped him put it there!
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Yeh myrk...this is an abandoned apartment...so the exit sign must have atleast an abvious defect...And which light do you mean??...then one in the second picture ??? [addsig]
Posted by Myrk- on Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 11:43am
Looking better. You did know your EXIT sign was upside down don't you? 
Also don't like that outdoors much, smells funny. Finally..... whats that light model you use on your ceiling, the little lump one?
[addsig]Ok Ok...
Anyway, New screen shots have been posted, i still will continue making an outside level, as a small corner of a nieghborhood, and maby a boiler room with a locker room, that you can enter from a door in the long hall way...ofcourse, ill add more details...which is what i am doing right now...
I hope u would like it
here are some URLS:
http://img133.exs.cx/img133/365/dmabandoned00326rj.jpg
http://img133.exs.cx/img133/9779/dmabandoned00337fi.jpg
http://img101.exs.cx/img101/7122/dmabandoned00280qm.jpg
[addsig]Posted by Cassius on Fri Jan 7th 2005 at 11:12pm
This is not a chatroom, nor is it a circlejerk. Put some thought into what you say.
Posted by ReNo on Fri Jan 7th 2005 at 5:20pm
Look at the first page in particular guys, I think thats mostly what Cass was getting at. Its basically just full of Dark and Habboi spamming the thread with consecutive replies, all caps posts and all bold, etc... In short, it just looks quite unlike other threads on these forums, in a bad way. But hey, by the looks of the other threads you guys are learning our ways here, so just try not to repeat these mistakes
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i fixed my avatar dude...its better now
