Posted by Mouse on Sun Jan 23rd 2005 at 7:33pm
Your map reminds me a little bit of "bouncex" for HL1. Try and track down that map and see how the interiors were done because they were done well.
Posted by Leperous on Sun Jan 23rd 2005 at 5:02pm
I've played it, and it's really quite boring! The outdoor area does look good and gives a great impression of being hot and barren. However the interiors really let it down- the windows are really too small to be useful, the rooms inside are usually just boxes with a few props and badly placed VIS-blocking wall, and the tall building with the ladder just doesn't work! (talking of which, most of your ladders don't work very well at all, especially the one leading to the RPG, which has quite fiddly little platforms to get to). Also, I didn't quite understand who'd put those huge concrete tubes on the roof, and what you can do with them?!
All in all, this could be quite fun if the buildings were redesigned- the exteriors look fine, but the interiors are just crap ![]()
The skybox buildings also seem to be larger than they should be, though they do look good otherwise. Also scale down the sand texture outside the level.
Posted by keved on Sun Jan 23rd 2005 at 3:55pm
(Only checked out the screens so far)
Looks quite nicely built but is very grey. Changing some of the textures to those with a bit more colour would help a lot.
Also, the boundary walls are very straight along the entire length. Maybe think about adding a few recesses and other interesting features.
Posted by BlisTer on Sun Jan 23rd 2005 at 1:08am
i like the atmosphere, but you can see the transition between your vertical sky"walls" and the sky"ceiling" [addsig]
Posted by Wakkawa on Sat Jan 22nd 2005 at 10:55pm
I like the buildings, but the textures and outdoors are kinda bland.
Posted by rs6 on Sat Jan 22nd 2005 at 8:23pm
overall the map looks good. But wary the textrues, it the same color texture through out the map. [addsig]
Posted by SWATSiLeNt on Sat Jan 22nd 2005 at 8:12pm
You will get more idea's and things to do and fix if you supply the screens.
Posted by Cassius on Sat Jan 22nd 2005 at 8:06pm
Looks okay, but you're a terrible screenshot photographer. Give us clearer shots of the map. [addsig]


