Posted by habboi on Sat Mar 5th 2005 at 10:45pm
Not bad for your first attempt but Dr glass has a point plus I see that 70% of the map is models!
Try making some architecture using brush based work and it will suffice!
[addsig]Posted by DrGlass on Sat Mar 5th 2005 at 8:52pm
for what it is, its dosn't look too bad. The problem is that it is just a box with some walls and models tossed in. When you make a map like this you have to try and draw the player into the situation. Take the new de_train, there are so many things that make me feel like I am in a real place that is only a smal part of a huge enviroment.
The best way to do this is with a sky box. here is a tutorial
Also, use google serch and try to find some pictures of a simular place. Add details and dont rely only on props to make your map look good.
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