Posted by Windows 98 on Fri Jun 10th 2005 at 10:55am

Yes, good first map. Even though they are right, it does look kinda dull and boring. I can see you put a lot of time and effort into (I hope) this being your first map. Keep up the good work. Some things you might want to add a 3d skybox, also its a little harshly lit. Put in some lights.

Posted by $loth on Thu Jun 9th 2005 at 9:39pm

make it bigger, more than some props and brushes inside a square box, make it more interesting, look up renos tutorial on displacements, make it into a small canyon if you will. Instead of those barrels why not have some jagged rocks, there are some in the models section of hammer. Don't make it look plain and boxy, have vertical and horizontal constrast. If you have some fps still left over why not add some rain and puddles?

Posted by Addicted to Morphine on Thu Jun 9th 2005 at 1:27pm

Uploading some screenshots would be helpful. People usually decide whether or not they'll download the map by looking at the screenshots.