Haha, thanks A_S, but how about some ratings huh? I mean, my adoring fans want some feed back
Posted by 7dk2h4md720ih on Sat Jun 12th 2004 at 4:03pm
Big improvement bud, nice one.
You still have the creepy walls of grass though!
After I got RAD to work the lighting has been fixed and i have to say it looks quite nice. Including the shadows that the trees cast
Posted by 7dk2h4md720ih on Wed Jun 2nd 2004 at 3:23pm
I don't have op4 installed so I didn't have some textures.
1. Just a small error with the side of the ladder here, fill it with red like your other one.
Bad construction here! You should make your hollow cylinders manually and sticking to the grid to avoid this.
Tiny gap between the rocks when you're in the area behind the waterfall.
The water texture on the back of your waterfall is scrolling sidewards.
Most of the stuff I was going to mention already has been. Enjoy your lan gmaes.
Once again guys thanks for all your input. As for the whole forest theme, its kinda a pet project of mine, expect another update in the near future. I really like this map and im sure a lot of other people do to. I know its not the best map and yes its still in a box, but im getting there. My next step is custom textures and better forest textures along with a winding river (instead of straight) and a more realistic waterfall.
Posted by Orpheus on Sat May 29th 2004 at 8:47pm
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cass.... I sense that you have some problems, get some professional help
best of luck |
when it reaches the point to where our new arrivals notice, its time to back up and reassess..
Cass, PM me if you wanna talk.. lord knows i have bothered you often enuff when i needed you..
holler at me.
[addsig]Posted by Gwil on Sat May 29th 2004 at 8:10pm
If you are planning to use/include crates in your map as cover, or detail - make sure you change them to world brushes, and don't be afraid of rotating them 
When everything is straight and square, it becomes a little boring.
Also, curvature and winding paths make for better gameplay
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Posted by JFry on Sat May 29th 2004 at 7:41pm
looks alot nicer with rad run
. I agree with omega about the ground. Try looking for a tutorial explaining the triangle method. Also the canopy overhanging everything looks ok but it could use more depth. I'd take out a section or two and add a few sections that are lower. Speaking of the canopy, it doesn't really blend well where it meets the walls. Perhaps throw up some more shrubbery or something in the corner to cover this up. The bunker looks pretty cool if a bit boxy. Normally crates are frowned upon but I think they look fitting here. Try adding some lights on the exterior and some trim on the building to offset the cuboid shape of it.
Once again thanks for the input guys, i appreciate it. I can see that im getting better b/c now instead of you guys telling me to use other than 3 textures im getting more comeplex suggestions.
