Posted by Kage_Prototype on Thu May 27th 2004 at 7:37am
The two main problems I can see are the textures and lighting. With textures, some of them are so stretched out that it looks awful. With lighting, ther's absolutely no shadowing, no contrast. It's like you didn't even run RAD. [addsig]
Posted by $loth on Thu May 27th 2004 at 6:57am
cass.... I sense that you have some problems, get some professional help 
pic 1.
The trees well, do't look like trees, get some other textures or maybe use one of the {tree textures.
The rock on the left has a bit of bad texturing, mainly that it is strectched.
pic 2.
get some borders in them windows, and have some stairs or a ramp going onto the platform with the barrels n crates, split it up a bit with some different textures
pic 3.
The water in the water fall seems to me that it is a little too see through,darken it up, as with the lighting in the map [do you have a light eviroment in there?] Lighting can work wonders in some of the most hideous maps
/me thinks of fy_iceworld 
best of luck 
Posted by Forceflow on Thu May 27th 2004 at 6:05am
Yep ... almost Fullbright ... and if that are supposed to be pipelines, get a darker texture for them.
The Waterfall is a nice idea, but maybe the water should look a little more ... like water.
Needs some work; I looked at their previous maps, and they have better lighting ... use the force, Luke
Posted by Gorbachev on Thu May 27th 2004 at 5:37am
Needs some lighting work, it's just bright, excessively bright. [addsig]
