This map is in our regular rotation and it's a pretty solid map. It's got good game play action and is pretty fun to play. It even handles 14+ players without to much of a problem. I recommend this map!
It seems strange, inconsistent. Your static props stand out starkly from the architecture simply because the structures are so basic. The light_environment and sky are fitting, but your choice of gray fog is stark against them.
I can tell you it won't win, mainly because it isn't finished! You have a really good looking frame for a map, you just need to fill it. Everything is built for a purpose- trust me, I'm an architecture student. What is the purpose of this building/s in the map? You need to make sure you put accross what it is exactly.
Looks nice, but some area's seem to be quite empty. I know people dont think adding models is a good idea, but the graity gun isn't much fun without stuff to toss about. I'll fire this one up and give it a real review