The full xenophobia storyline

Hey its me Half-dude

here's the story for my first mod (dont worry I not a newbie)

your gordon freemen a former scientist at the black mesa, after the invasion you escape and take a new job from the mysterius G-man and are quikly teleported to another BM funded facility the "Black mesa xenofunia test facility C1 a highly definded lab buit into one of the astroids of xen! with a ring of lazer cannons surrunding the complex the "definse ring". you are headed to the test lab on your first day and everythings going great but but then BOOM!! CRASH!!!! AHHHHHHHH!! the whole complex is invaded by the aliens outside its up to you to shut down the defince ring and power up the the emergecy teleporters to escape an give the other personel a chance of escape, good luck you'll need it.

I know I am going to get flamed to hell for this, "But for gods sake, USE SPELL CHECK!!"

Secondly, story seems a bit...bland. Work on it a bit, make some big twists [keep them secret of course]

But eh, was worth a 2/5.

Sounds like Poke 646

I don't know your backround, I assume english isn't your first language. But, as the story goes. It seems "used," that idea is the most overlyused stories for a single player mod. But, story doesn't matter if you make it an enjoyable mod.

Well if you don't like it, don't download it.

finish it, and we'll see if its worth the download... :razz:

Doc Brass... :dodgy:

Hey sorry for the harsh-ness, yes I agree that the plot is over used but I've seen mods with that storyline and it had but maping, I just want to see how I do.

Yes english is my first language I'm ether wrighting fast (like I am now) or just simply misspell words. :kitty:

you'll like it

P.S I've never played Poke 646