[map] dm_concrete_coffin

This is a a discussion topic for the map "dm_concrete_coffin" by daver which can be found here

Map description:

a smaller map, with simple construction, but with plenty of rooms, alcoves and open spaces; plus a few hidden doorways to find

Map screenshots:

Although you committed a few mapping sins (no light fixtures, blocky brushwork, an enclosed killboxy room) this map has a certain quality to it. Like rough, modern architecture.

If you want any more praise, I'd suggest having more detailed brushwork and a less "box-based" layout approach. If you stick to mapping, read a few tutorials and take some of the criticism to heart, I expect some decent maps by yours in the future.

This is very simple and too close to a killbox yet.