[map] dm_[sfc]_camp

This is a a discussion topic for the map "dm_[sfc]_camp" by dr.bock which can be found here

Map description:

some early screenshots from my first selfmade map.
i think i finished my work soon...2 weeks, maybe 3?

this map is build from the original clanmeetingplace of [SFC]
senior-fight-club:-)

we drink some beer and eat steaks at the fireplace...
my english is not so gut aber wir hatten da m?chtig party und ne menge spass.
wenn euch meine map gef?llt bitte nur positive kritik.

and...visit our homepage http://senior-fightclub.de

and visit 1 of 3 servers, u find the ip on our page

Map screenshots:

Thx mr. reaper:-)

i know the prob. with the ladder. its hard to build one only with brushes.
before i finish my work i will fix it...sure.

decals and other details are in work...first i create the buildings.

thx for your comment...

you have visit my server??? nice

Looked at screen #2 today. Its contents was impressive. However, its size was still insulting since there was ample time to fix it.

Shame. The map is losing its appeal... With each screen.

Looks good as an outside map, I agree with reaper about transitioning from outside to inside, it should be dirtier.
The architecture looks a little lack-luster, from what I can tell, the rooms are rather empty. Try adding some support beams.
BTW, where did you get those tree models?

They almost look like they're made from brushes.

As for the content of the screens, it looks pretty good. I think you could add more lighting to the building itself to make it stand out against the skyline.

Looked at screen #3 today, took just short of 2 minutes to arrive.

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Thx all together:-)

@ A. t. Morphine
now i add more lightning to the building
see screenshot 5
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y159/drbock/abba50003.jpg

@ Stadric
u can download the tree_models at the following URL
http://www.uni-weimar.de/~viehoefe/hl2/index.html
its for free.
6 trees with 6 different skins = 36 trees

last but not least
@ Orpheus
sorry about the longlong time to download my screenshots:-(

I like what I am seeing. My complaints are heartfelt. The fact that I keep coming back should prove that much.

Keep them at, or around 100k. Less is always preferable.