No Weapons? No Monsters? :cry; Was this suppose to be singleplayer or multiplayer?
Anyway, your mapping is getting better tnkqwe, you are slowly but surly working up the ranks.
What I feel is that you should move away from making killbox styled maps, and maybe focus on a meaningful single or multiplayer maps. I mean sure, killboxs' are fun and you get experience from them, but generally, people aren't interested in them and won't download them, which is why I feel your maps don't get many comments.
I feel that maybe your getting excited about an idea, you will map it out in a day or how ever long it takes, upload it then move on. What the folks want to see is these ideas fleshed out and made into greatness, single or multiplayer, they want to be immersed in the environment and have fun and be amazed by the map.
For example, I downloaded this map, ran around in it for about one and a half minutes, looking at the map, then I quit and that's probably the last time I will play it.
Now, I am only telling you what people want to see, what YOU want to see could be a totally different thing, if you enjoy making these, small, quick, one room, little effort maps, thats 100% fine and you should keep doing it.
Anyway, good stuff, your improving! Give yourself a pat on the back

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