DM_Spiral_Assault_beta

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Edit:

http://www.projectmoonracer.org/hl2/spiral.htm

Screenshots and the map itself can be found at the link above.

I thought I had that included but I guess not. I'm getting all sorts of
errors on the board so don't know if I've done something wrong or not
(the original post I made for this only showed up in my profile).

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This is a team only HL2DM map I've been working on for a while and
could really use some feedback on. I'm new to mapping so not
expecting much. Critique is just as welcome as ideas.

This is somewhat experimental and designed for linear team
gameplay. I realize making a linear map like this is asking for a
lot, but I'm up to the challenge.

thanks for taking a look,

moonracer1313

Screenshots.

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-[Better to be Honest than Kind]-

seems nice concept, and the first 2 screens on your site look good & realistic

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These words are my diaries screaming out loud

It looks like a great start actually, though you really need to brush up on your texturing skills- try not to use 'flat' boring textures everywhere (especially concrete ones!), there are literally hundreds of HL2 textures you can use (try searching for 'brickwall' or 'concretewall' or 'nature', for example).