ctf_2castle_v1

WTF? Does the "edit" button not work today? Should you post a bug in the forums?

and, your screens are much to large..
http://www.snarkpit.net/editing.php?page=tutorials&game=HL2&id=158

The stain next to the piping doesnt really fit... seeing how there is no leak

You could have chosen a better texture variation than that tan tile texture

and screens way to big

and as I have said before, you shouldn't submit complete maps, you should always leave room for improvement

Shame on me, i have some bugs in it, i change the screens and from the map is a new version 1.1 in work, sorry 4 that

sighs
Now you've edited the screens into non-existence.. <150k to much trouble?

I change it all @ 23 cet :), when iam back from work, the pics will have then 800x600 size

/edit: you can see no pic cause photodump.com is down @ the moment

You can upload them here I think from your hard drive.. try.

Ok, I have looked at your map in it's entirety...

The Good:
Liked how you isolated the rocket launcher.
Liked the rounds won area.

The Bad:
Terrain looks fake.
Map is too small.
You can lock off the flag completly with sams.
Texture alignment in some areas.
The sky looks too HL1ish
Need a skybox to make the area look like a place, not a box.
Some props looked odd being there...

The Ugly:
Your missing a material in the combine base. That hump you have there near the wall.

Summery:
Ok for a first map, but leave it at that, a first map.

The material is one of the bugs i have postet, and i wait for the upload from my map v1.1 to the hl2ctfmaps.com, only a admin can put it on the page

The size of the map is wantet

Some People (not me ) had said the custom-sky is very good.

This is not my first map for HL, but my first map 4 HL2, and i think your rating is to low

Now the new screenshots are uploadet

Now i have set my own topic to get feedback, about my map.

Known bugs: 1 Material file is missing

Sky is to low

There is a final version 1.1 on upload @ hl2ctfmaps.com, i hope the next 1-2 days i get the okay from the admin there.

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Mess with the best, die like the rest

I'm glad you saw the light and are going to do some more
work on it.

Until later...

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Dark_Kilauea
DVS Administration
http://www.dvstudio-production.com/

Please Test my new Version 1.1 and give me feedback about bugs etc.

Fixed: Missing Materialfile

Middle-Towerwall split

Tweaks: Sky to low

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Mess with the best, die like the rest