Re: [map] Shadow
Posted by Jezpuh on
Mon Feb 21st 2005 at 9:07pm
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Why did you add the same map twice? Is it to attract more people? ONE IS ENOUGH OK BYE.
Re: [map] Shadow
Posted by Crono on
Mon Feb 21st 2005 at 9:17pm
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Screen 1 looks good (so far), but the others are painful to look at. Those stairs need some railings and blocking from the bottom. Something that shows structural integrity. all of the textures inside need major work. You might want to add some brush detail for that woodwork.
Obviously, I can't comment on the layout really.
Re: [map] Shadow
Posted by satchmo on
Mon Feb 21st 2005 at 9:19pm
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Remove one of your maps. Don't post the exact same map twice. You won't earn any respect that way.
Re: [map] Shadow
Posted by DyEx on
Mon Feb 21st 2005 at 9:43pm
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Yeah sry about that, i could not update my other map page so i made a new one.
Re: [map] Shadow
Posted by cbk on
Tue Feb 22nd 2005 at 2:43am
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First screen : Looks wierd with that big opening in the wall when just around the corner isn't a wall. I'd suggest adding a wall there and maybe adding a garage door half open or something...or maybe just one of those. anyway look aight so far.