Pretty good first map, I know I did a lot worse when I was starting
out! Good start with the lighting, and I like the decoration above the
door.
But from the screenshots, I get an overall impression that the room is
just a box with things in it. While lots of rooms in the real world are
boxy, it doesn't make for a terribly interesting level to play in. I'm
not too concerned, since this is just one room, but try to have more
interesting layouts with future rooms.
Also, the room is noticably bare of details. If you're going for that
look, good; but otherwise, consider searching for reference pictures of
an actual morgue online for some detail ideas. When people play or look
at your level, they already have a few expectations of what to find in
a morgue. Dead people, dissections, etc. You have to try to live up to
those expectations, to a degree, to build up a state of immersion and
believability.
Oh, and welcome to the Snarkpit. :smile: