Wow, novel looking level! I like seeing people do stuff like this

As you yourself admit it isn't the best lookin thing to grace the engine, but it's eye catching and bold, and it's trying something different. Kudos.
I think you could afford to take it a little further - given your intentions with the level it feels to me like you could push the vertical nature a little more. As it stands it looks like most of the roofs are inaccessible (at least from normal routes) while they could instead perhaps be a major part of the level. It feels like you'd want some tall towers that give commanding views for sniping, and agile routes of jumping across rooftops for skillful play. Maybe a little late a 99% for those suggestions, but just some thoughts