[map] ns_jolt

This is a a discussion topic for the map "ns_jolt" by Shask which can be found here

Map description:

u can get more pics here http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=4&t=51749&s=81f33ea96ddab42790152dc52bd9c862 to get screens...and critz and comments..and well i cant give a size right now cause well its not done...but i think it will turn out..medium or large...|Story|the year is now 2008..many marines have been stray in this ship for years..some how they survive..but now they have found out that alien lifeforms have now reached them...so will the marines over power the aliens or will the aliens conquer another stray ship?..

Map screenshots:

1st shot: Too bright
2nd shot: Arguably the best one here, since it just feels more like NS
3rd shot: Needs more stuff.

Overall: Needs more details, 'tis NS, after all. Curved walls are always helpful, and dark bits are good to have as well, just something to make the Marines crap their pants.

k ill work on that :)..ill take out some of those lights on the 1st pic and on the 3rd ill add somthing(s) thx.

that last shot seems a bit too multicoloured.

that last shot seems a bit too multicoloured.

I notice in particular that the floors are quite flat. If the screens are representitive, I think you need more vertical play. it can be quite boring to be in a primarily planar map.

I agree with Mr. Bullet, the floors (and ceilings) need more detail. Don't go overboard with the verticality however as this can really make the commander's job a pain.