Not too bad. I listened to it while I was reading some of the other posts, and it certainly has that ominous linger to it. Albeit though, I did find it annoying towards the end. As it's the same dissonance between the notes that is strung out for too long that does it I believe. If it were used as ambient music for a scary scene, I would add some different filler between the clashing piano keys. At least another sound to take the angled melody to a soft uneasiness, and THEN return back to the piano to finish it off, and/or seamlessly loop it.
Otherwise, sounds alright!
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