<span style="color: orange;">ok
guys thanks for the feedback so far. I'm gonna read those tuts. I
glanced at them earlier and from what i saw i could definitely see
where I can do better with my architecture :wink:

thanks

Dibz

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OK... am i really that bad? Ok dont answer that!!!

Dibz Listen to 'Tracer's' Advice and rad those architecture tutorials as they will help you loads!

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Mother of God.

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God forbid!

I think what you need to focus on is detail and architectural interest. Have a look at Some of ReNo's excellent architecture tutorials:

http://www.snarkpit.com/editing.php?page=tutorials&game=HL&id=93

http://www.snarkpit.com/editing.php?page=tutorials&game=HL&id=10

They were written for HL1, but are equally applicable to HL2 mapping.
I'm not sure it is best to start with an outdoor project. Historically those have been the most difficult maps to get right, and I don't know how much the addition of displacement surfaces has changed that.

Its a big open field....and there's an invisible light source in the house.

Ok habboi, pics are up! as you can see there are some flaws, like the glass and the light, can somebody help me as to what to do wiv that purple water?

thanks

Dibz

My suggestion Mr Dibz is that you should'nt post a map unless you have a screenshot because it is not as if there is a race to get a slot for your map!

Next time please wait before posting a map unless you have screenshots

Im curious about this map and hope to see it in progress!