one thing is that it seems kind of random, y would there be one machine, then nothing else there? Also, right next to the machine is a huge red container trhingy of a moebobber, but anyways, good map for your first time!

the scale seems too big, but I can see that you are learning quite well.

This map certainly is a gallimaufry of different elements.

That light inside the crushed storage container doesn't make much
sense. Perhaps a flare... or a lantern or a broken combine light
thing that's been detached.

The scale seems really off.. its like halfway to a Rats map. I'm
thinking particularly of the big door and the curved hallway.

(bump)screenie updates above.

Is it cubemapped?
Looks ok so far but make it more interesting with the arch tool as you wrote above :smile:

Juim said:
I like to consider it "just the first room", ahem.

wipes brow

cool, /me was scared for a second.

BTW, nice looking box full of props/prefabs you got there. :heee:
/runs.

I like to consider it "just the first room", ahem.

I'm off to practice curved-arched hallways now.

whispers just above audibility

"but, its a box"

I promised I wouldn't tell anyone... :razz:

It looks better now that it's brighter, although I don't think this
killbox will be very popular. Perhaps it would be better if this
was kept a behind the scenes learning exercise?

By the way, the textures definitely look better on your machine, although those bricks still look ginormous.

Well you've got lighting, cables, props, decals, ladders and weapons/items down. Time for a real map!