[map] dm_karma

This is a a discussion topic for the map "dm_karma" by ramza which can be found here

Map description:

This is my first dm map that i'm intending to release to the community. I have designed maps for HL1 SP, but only for personal use. This is just an early stage of what the map will look like after a few days of work. Dont mind the lighting I just stuck some lights in there to get an idea of what it'll look like in-game. I may enter it into the valve DM competition if im satisifed with it.

Map screenshots:

This is some good work. Fix up the lighting and add a bit more detail in some areas, and it'll be a great Deathmatch map .

Agreed. Although the enviornment itself looks very good, the lighting is knocking it down a lot. Try throwing in some color variance in the lighting, as well as more contrast in the lighting itself. When I first looked at the pics, I thought it was rendering at fullbright. It's just too washed out right now.

Your pipes look fairly low-poly as well - Make them 16 sided or something, you've got more engine power to work with.

Really nice, what does that ground texture do up under the roof anyway :P

Doesnt look bad. Add some more advanced burshwork, its mostly just props now. Also, alot of people (including myself) are getting sick of blowed up cars.