[map] Church

This is a a discussion topic for the map "Church" by gorami which can be found here

Map description:

Well place of god off coarse and what scary place to play DM!

Map screenshots:

And this looks like doom. Please, stop posting this kind of maps. I understand you're proud of them, but keep them to yourself.

You have a light with no apparent source... try adding torches, candles, or light bulbs to make your levels more realistic. Also -- your rooms are way too boxy. There's no real religious architecture going on that would indicate this was a church. If it weren't for the coffins I wouldn't have known this was a church.

Messy brushwork again, dead ends, no connectivity or flow, no light sources.

Thankfully you have a theme, and yes I see now that you have pews, giant crosses, stained glass, and grandfather clocks (what?) as well as black squares i'm assuming are meant to be headstones. So, you get points for attempting a theme.

Andrei your mean you dont care at least people try. What map critics anyway and iam not valve you know

Sorry, I didn't intend to be mean (well, maybe just a little). It's just that the net is saturated with people's first maps and this phenomenon really is getting out of hand IMHO.
And maybe you SHOULD start comparing yourself with valve. It will help you improve yourself.

Sometruth in Andrei's words there, The mappers from Valve produce good stuff...be better!

No sound(as I remember) feels now like boring