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                        Posted by Juim on 
    Mon Jan 14th 2008 at 5:03am
                     
                    
                 
                
            
            
                
    
                    
                             Juim
                            Juim
            
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            726 posts
        386 snarkmarks
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    Feb 14th 2003
                    Occupation: Motion Picture Grip
                            Location: Los Angeles
             
                
                        I ran around this map in a server today and the first thing that happened to me was getting stuck for no rerason in a well. I typed "kill" in the console and proceeded into a building where a giant contraption of some sort made it almost impossible  to get to the RPG. I tried to grav gun it, but it was stuck to the floor. This was my first and last 5 minutes spent in the map. I suggest that you are off to a great mapping future, but this one is definitely unplayable. The layout is confusing, cramped, and awkward. The style is a hodge podge of ungainly textures, but it does look interesting from many vantage points. You do have a good eye for this but you need to study DM layouts and tips.
Good luck on your next release.
Verdict
A beginners folly, but not the worst I've seen.
                                    
             
        
            
            
                                     
                                
                    
                        Re: [map] dm_detritus_v2
                        Posted by Juim on 
    Mon Jan 14th 2008 at 5:03am
                     
                    
                 
                
            
            
                
    
                    
                             Juim
                            Juim
            
                        member
     
            726 posts
        386 snarkmarks
        Registered: 
    Feb 14th 2003
                    Occupation: Motion Picture Grip
                            Location: Los Angeles
             
                
                        I ran around this map in a server today and the first thing that happened to me was getting stuck for no rerason in a well. I typed "kill" in the console and proceeded into a building where a giant contraption of some sort made it almost impossible  to get to the RPG. I tried to grav gun it, but it was stuck to the floor. This was my first and last 5 minutes spent in the map. I suggest that you are off to a great mapping future, but this one is definitely unplayable. The layout is confusing, cramped, and awkward. The style is a hodge podge of ungainly textures, but it does look interesting from many vantage points. You do have a good eye for this but you need to study DM layouts and tips.
Good luck on your next release.
Design
Gameplay
Verdict
A beginners folly, but not the worst I've seen.
Pros
interesting  look
Design
poor layout . many mistakes.
                                    
             
        
            
            
                                     
                                
                    
                        Re: [map] dm_detritus_v2
                        Posted by obidm on 
    Fri Mar 18th 2011 at 7:10pm
                     
                    
                 
                
            
            
                
    
                    
                             obidm
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                        Dunno what Juim is talking about. Maybe he's referring to an old old version? This map plays very well for smaller numbers of players, I'm glad to have it on my server. It's fast, and while it works especially well for people who like to keep moving in patterns from pickup to pickup, it also has a couple of nice unexpected camping perches. Great little map!
                                    
             
        
            
            
                                     
                                
                    
                        Re: [map] dm_detritus_v2
                        Posted by Orpheus on 
    Fri Mar 18th 2011 at 10:17pm
                     
                    
                        
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    2011-03-18 10:17pm
                     
                 
                
            
            
                
    
                    
                             Orpheus
                            Orpheus
            
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    Aug 26th 2001
                    Occupation: Long Haul Trucking
                            Location: Long Oklahoma - USA
             
                
                        Although I could think of a better introduction than an old Satchmo map... Welcome to Snarkpit.
My advice would be to look through the maps. There are much better authors to peruse. Either way, enjoy your stay.
                                            
                        
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