dm_dump_beta

This is my first custom map ever. It works okay with bots, but I havn't
got a chance to play it with people. I think it's a good small map.
Tell me what you think!!

for what it is, its dosn't look too bad. The problem is that it
is just a box with some walls and models tossed in. When
you make a map like this you have to try and draw the player into the
situation. Take the new de_train, there are so many things that
make me feel like I am in a real place that is only a smal part of a
huge enviroment.

The best way to do this is with a sky box.
here
is a tutorial

Also, use google serch and try to find some pictures of a simular
place. Add details and dont rely only on props to make your map
look good.

Not bad for your first attempt but Dr glass has a point plus I see that 70% of the map is models!

Try making some architecture using brush based work and it will suffice!