My first DM map...i hope it is going to be succesfull...anyway...this is an abandoned apartment...except that its full of War, Blood, and Some Butt kicking to do...I still DIDNT finish this map...so u may relize some bugs, errors, noobish mistakes...and anything else...plz if u find something GOOD to add ...plz tell me right away by commenting...All pictures are in the URL : http://www.freewebs.com/zuhdiweb/news.htm
Dark you have a pipe going through a pilar on the 1st picture
The green sign is stretched, make it smaller!
The third picture has a wall with a wall texture that has wood at the bottom and cement at the top but you made it so there is wood at the bottom and then cement and then wood again! (Hard to explain) i will fix for you later anyway!
The 1st shot is thin, although you may be able to get away with it if
it's almost never used besides for spawning (think dm_lockdown, behind
the shower room).
The 2nd shot look REALLY strange. What's going on down there?
3rd shot, what's going on with the ceiling? I'm very confused with this map.
The 4th shot has a weird hole in the wall that looks significantly
different from the rest of the room. Also, I think that wall
texture needs stretched or something, the window textures are
misaligned and need rotating, and fix that "exit" sign. Abandoned
buildings don't just magically have their words flip around.
Last, in the 5th shot, I see that you got the env_sun entity working, but that's about it.
Needs detail, less weird brushwork, etc. Keep mapping!
1st picture... the one where red light is coming from white lighting fixtures :eek: I think your green light is too bright too. And where are the old broken/not on lights in that room? And is there actually an exit there (even if you can't go through it)
Posted by Dark|Killer on
Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 3:53pm
[Author]
Yeh myrk...this is an abandoned apartment...so the exit sign must have atleast an abvious defect...And which light do you mean??...then one in the second picture ???
Looking better. You did know your EXIT sign was upside down don't you? :razz:
Also don't like that outdoors much, smells funny. Finally..... whats that light model you use on your ceiling, the little lump one?
Posted by Dark|Killer on
Sat Jan 8th 2005 at 7:23am
[Author]
Ok Ok...
Anyway, New screen shots have been posted, i still will continue making an outside level, as a small corner of a nieghborhood, and maby a boiler room with a locker room, that you can enter from a door in the long hall way...ofcourse, ill add more details...which is what i am doing right now... :smile: :smile: I hope u would like it :smile:
<DIV class=quote>
<DIV class=quotetitle>? quoting habboi</DIV>
<DIV class=quotetext>I have no idea but it is useful because you can keep the people here up-to-date on your map. Also 'Cass' what sh**? </DIV></DIV>
This is not a chatroom, nor is it a circlejerk. Put some thought into what you say.
Look at the first page in particular guys, I think thats mostly what
Cass was getting at. Its basically just full of Dark and Habboi
spamming the thread with consecutive replies, all caps posts and all
bold, etc... In short, it just looks quite unlike other threads on
these forums, in a bad way. But hey, by the looks of the other threads
you guys are learning our ways here, so just try not to repeat these
mistakes :smile:
Posted by Dark|Killer on
Fri Jan 7th 2005 at 5:12pm
[Author]
<DIV class=quote>
<DIV class=quotetitle>? quoting ReNo</DIV>
<DIV class=quotetext>Dark Killer, your avatar text is too long a single word and extends into your signature area, which is kinda screwy. Might wanna shorten it.
</DIV></DIV>
