This is a solid map. One thing I can't understand though is why haven't you given a "killserver" or "quit" command at the end of it? Leaving the player to kill the server themselves. It would have a more well rounded feeling if you gave it a killserver command after the "Gamingparents" advert. Oh, and, um, have you beefed up the physcannon you cheeky so and so...?

I find it odd that you choose the word "campaign" to describe this map. It is just an ordinary single player map.