Riot

This sucker took me 3 weeks to make, it's my first released map.

Make of it as you will, any constructive critisism is welcome.

The title you put over half the screens is kind of big.

I was fixing it before you said that, hehe.

Have your screenshots 800x600 resolution so we can make out details. :smile:

Blah, everyone is critical about screenshots, eh?

I'll fix it after I get some sleep.

If its for TFC, then why is there an UZI in the screen shot1?!!?
Only Sven Coop has those! Bah!

I'd still like to know why TFC has an uzi in it...

Yes, those screens are both small... and big. you really ought to get an optomizer

like this

but, hell! thats a good map for your first released!

Oh, hehe, custom model of mine. I have to up the size of those screenshots anyway to appease the "masses" anyway. After I sleep...

Haha!

Edit: Screenshots Fixed. New, larger, and different screenshots are up.

Thanks, it was hard work.

I fixed the screenshots, all of them are larger and from defferent perspective, and are more compressed than before.

This is definitely more than "OK" for your first map. Keep going, you have the talent for it.

Looks very good for a 1st released map

I agree that looks to be a great first release. Nice one Nuggs!

Thanks a lot! I like the lighting, if I do say so myself =P

It could do with a nicer sky.
some of the textures seem to be a bit misplaced, but none more so than others, so it's not like any of them stand out too bad.
the thing that i've seen a lot of people say they have probs with is the ent setup for this type of gameplay. you seem to have pulled it off just fine. gj.

I had to take bits and peices of tutorials all over the internet to make that system work. Non of them gave me what I wanted completely, so I had to make up my own solutions. Its was 2 days of intense headaches, I'll tell you that.

Thanks a lot for the responses!

And about the sky, I tried many, but they were all too bright or out of place for the atmosphere I was trying to achieve. I just kept with the space skybox and it turned out looking ok.