dm_monolith

I can barely see anything!

Ahh i like these ciadel maps, i was working on one too...but i got bored, but it might need a little more light, i like the darker maps...but this one is abit too dark. and the monitor on the last screen, the blue light araound it is too blue, make it a combination between green and blue (mostly blue) then a bit grey

Uhh... its WAY too dark... add more lights and some 7r00 lasers or something lighty...

I was going for a darker feel, but I suppose it could stand to be lit a bit more. Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on the lighting around the monitor and post some new pics tomorrow. I'll have a download link up really soon, too. What are 7r00 lasers? Sounds interesting.

It is a bit dark but i can see it just, and it looks swell at the moment...

Maybe add more architecture because i noticed third picture looked a little bare

Ok, i've brightened the level up some. I'm pretty sure it's acceptable. As for the monitor glow, that's been updated as well. I'm almost ready to release the beta. Probably tonight ot tomorrow, along with the updated screenshots. I left the room in the third picture alone just because it's pretty big and it's a good arena for head to head shooting, with a long Combine Ball dispenser tucked into the wall as seen in the pic. Almost there folks. Any feedback is appreciated.

This map is near completion (98%). Any and all feedback is welcome. Play the beta and enjoy (hopefully). Still getting optimization help from higher up. Thanks!

BACK STORY

<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt">Earth, 2046. The Russian city formerly known as Kazan is now called </SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial">город зернокомбайна 8, (Combine City 8 ). For over two years the citizens of City 8 have been secretly planning a revolt against their Combine oppressors. The resistance, which have become known as ?The Hive? have gained access to the Combine Headquarters. This headquarters is a precursor to the Combine Citadel?s that are currently being used. These late model ?Citadels? are called Monoliths; a structure similar to a modern day Citadel but are rectangle in shape and are comparable in height. It is later thought that due to their height, the Monolith?s design was changed to a more functionally stable triangle shape that you see today.<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN>

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<SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-fareast-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">The Hive have slowly made their way to the top of the Monolith in an attempt to free themselves from a horrible alien race. Will this be the eve of destruction for the resistance, or a victory for all mankind?</SPAN>

ok, the map is finished. Go check it out!! :biggrin:

Thanks for the help ReNo!!

Finished!! Enjoy!! Or not....

Map is to massive for the amount of items.. otherwise plays well.. /me likes