I've never seen a warehouse where the doors are hanging in mid-air like
that. Usually there's a concrete walkway running along the outside.

It's a commendable first effort, but it's lacking any major detail, and
a few light sources inside. I'd suggest adding a few non-rectangular
buildings as there isn't really much to it at the moment.

It looks good!

The lights on the exterior part are well put!

improve the inside part now

Updated again:)

Yeah im planning on 2 big fat girder style pillars in the main box section, concentrating on the outside details atm, more pics to come soon:D

Try adding pillars to the interiors - it doesn't look right to have such large rooms with nothing supporting the ceiling.

Yeah things are getting better as I learn whats what! keep the tips coming:D

I'm beginning to like the look of this, much more like a warehouse now (I seem to recall the first one having some wierd metally structure that didn't make sense, glad you changed it :)). Keep at it!

When i first clicked on the map's name and saw the first pic i could have sworn it was for HL1 :O. Me needs to clean my brain. :S

Just updated the pics,starting to improve things now:D

Haha cheers nikelplate im working on the details now, the pictures are mainly of the basic setup, hopefully will have an update soon:)