Thankyou 'The Silence' but i am not very good at making maps and giving me a high rating makes me feel well bad or guilty. Thank you anyway.

I dont like ure resoulution, but gud map!!

Yes i do agree with him but that map has caused me grief for a long time even though its simple it had so many errors

I made it as i wanted it to be so ill leave it and the next time i'll listen to the advice but he had plenty of time to note that before i finished it!

I believe you're taking Captain P's comments the wrong way. He's not trying to put you down. He's offering helpful suggestions on ways to improve your map. Trust him and take his tips, and your next map will look better than the current one.

Well thats your choice captain p but i have loads of people who like it so i dont care what you say as its not always detail anyway i forgot to say :P

Downloaded it now and indeed, the lighting direction doesn't fit with the sun position. Only some top faces of a rock are lit by the sun, while especially these should be in the shadow considering the sun position...

The map lacks layout greatly. It's basically just one big box and two dead-end corridors, with some objects thrown in. About the objects, I don't feel all of them are well chosen. For example, the bundle of woods shouldn't be a prop_physics... rather a prop_static. Looks kinda weird to pickup a bundle and see them being treated as one object.

Also some of the rock textures are over-stretched. Doesn't look good imho.

I'd say you should really work a lot more on this map before releasing it...

Either that or make the sky a sunrise and put the sun really low

Do you think so? well i got suggestions and one person wanted it to be cloudy so i used a cloudy sky but then one guy said it needs to be sunny so i put env_sun in it and both suggestions are inputed

I can change it but tell me how

Is it me or does that sun not fit with the brightness level and light direction of the map?