Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Ferret on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 6:56am
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rain is hard to cath on film or by the eye. Make it more blurry.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by 2dmin on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 7:57am
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It looks good, perhaps do as Ferret suggested and make the rain more streaky, and longer.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by $loth on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 8:16am
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Yea, it sorta reminds me of the matrix....
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Finger on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 4:47pm
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Your drawing was really nice, but it seems you lost the clearly defined values that made it work, once you colored it. It kinda freaked me out, because I just recently did a batman doodle that looked almost identical. Anyway.... lose the smudge tool, and define your values more. If your using photoshop, create an adjustment layer at the very top (layer, adjustment later, Hue and Saturation), and drop the saturation all the way, so that it turns grayscale. Now, you can switch this layer off and on, and be able to flip between grayscale/color. The values of color are what define an image, so when picking color make sure it works in grayscale too.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Kage_Prototype on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 4:51pm
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If you want to make the rain look more realistic, have the drops splashing on his shoulders and head etc. This makes it look like he's in the rain, instead of behind the rain.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Kage_Prototype on
Wed Jul 7th 2004 at 9:19pm
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Meh, I liked the rain...
Looks good either way. :smile:
Re: The Dark Knight
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The latest coloured one looks kinda cool. The pencil one looks awesome. The others (no offence) look like crap :razz: Though you've turned that crap into something good, good work!
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by ReNo on
Thu Jul 8th 2004 at 1:29pm
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The pencil one is miles better than the coloured ones in my opinion, and the newest one seems much too dark to me.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Skeletor on
Thu Jul 8th 2004 at 7:50pm
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Rain doesn't usually fall from directly above, you have to take into consideration wind, etc.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Crono on
Thu Jul 8th 2004 at 11:18pm
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I think the pencil sketch is s**t. So, I'm not seeing what you guys think is to great about it past the sharp shadows.
I actually muddied the colors on purpose, and again, I didn't smudge anything, it's all air brush :smile: (if you notice, the mouth is a completly different shape in the colored versions.
And yes, I see what you're saying, Finger.
I'm not done with it, obviously, but, I just need to smooth out the color transitions on his cowl and the visible parts of his cape.
And if the last one is too dark for you to see, its your monitor, I suppose I can make a brighter one, so you can see what it looks like.
Anyway, keep them coming, and don't be offended if I don't take everyones comments into consideration :smile:
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Finger on
Fri Jul 9th 2004 at 12:58am
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Np Crono. Just trying to give some perspective that has helped me in my attempts at understanding color....no pressure to change previous pics, just food for thought.
You know, I've never really used the airbrush tool. (buries head in photoshop again)
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Crono on
Fri Jul 9th 2004 at 6:46am
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You should, its a magnificent thing. :smile:
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by G.Ballblue on
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Looks like batman :biggrin:
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The rain shouldnt be so condensed. Try it with fewer drops and more space between them.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Finger on
Wed Jul 14th 2004 at 6:01pm
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I would put some dancing ponies behind him, and maybe a rainbow.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Crono on
Wed Jul 14th 2004 at 7:42pm
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That's what I was thinking, but for some reason Gotham seemed like a better idea. (I meant on technique, smartass, after I had started and shown something) :smile:
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Finger on
Wed Jul 14th 2004 at 8:21pm
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:razz: For Gotham, I think a silhouette of buldings would work....anything very detailed would distract from the character.
Re: The Dark Knight
Posted by Crono on
Wed Jul 14th 2004 at 8:51pm
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... actually, thats a really good idea ...