Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Tracer Bullet on
Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 3:20am
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Hmm, guys in full biohazard self contained environmental suits fenceing?
Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Finger on
Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 5:02am
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Very nice Gwill! You've really hit on the power of digital painting. It's so easy to work with color. You can grasp the foundations of tone and hue much easier, in this medium.
The values on the guy in the gray suit are working well, in defining him. You seem to lose the form a little in the other guy. His colors seem a little confused..maybe simplify the color division into 3 or 4 values, and dont worry about the shading/detailing, until after the basic body shapes are well defined. Keep posting pics, as you play around...I'm looking forward to seeing more progression.
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Re: Some fairly new work..
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Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 11:10am
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Looks more like Biohazard guy vs. Yeti Man having a fist waving match!
Uh, no offence or anything Gwil :biggrin:
Re: Some fairly new work..
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Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 11:17am
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I like it, but cant make out the swords.
Re: Some fairly new work..
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Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 12:10pm
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Nah its definately fenching.
Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Gwil on
Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 3:23pm
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Thanks for all the feedback so far, like I say it is work in progress so there are improvements to be made :smile:
Orph: thanks, its the first ive tried working anywhere near "properly" in colour, its supposed to feel like it was done in inks :smile:
biohazard suit people: definition will come :razz: belts, sheaths etc :razz:
Finger: my thoghts exactly... im gonna redo the guy in brown today, give him a complete overhaul and layer the "paint" up properly this time... :smile:
kornflakes - i added then deleted the actual foils from the fencers hands, gonna add those further toward the end..
Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Tracer Bullet on
Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 7:28pm
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I supose I should have mentioned that I actualy do like it very much, though it feels odd to me to have so much empty space off to their right.
Re: Some fairly new work..
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Fri Mar 5th 2004 at 11:32pm
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I hate to tell you, but the more detail you put in the clouds, the less like clouds they look like... if they weren't so blue I'd think them a mountainside.
The rest of it seems nice, but since it's far from my style I don't really have pointers to give. There are, however, discrepancies with the lightsource in a lot of places.
Re: Some fairly new work..
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Sun Mar 7th 2004 at 11:36am
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No, no, no!
It's 2 of them intel men in thier little clean suits battling it out over a new processor! Cannot you see!?
Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Cassius on
Mon Mar 8th 2004 at 6:32am
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When I look at it closer, the legs on both of them are really short in comparison to the rest of 'em.
Re: Some fairly new work..
Posted by Gwil on
Mon Mar 8th 2004 at 10:58am
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aye, the more you look the discrepancies there are... the legs were difficult to represent accurately in terms of scale due to the trousers I gave them to wear...
i'll add it to my list of pointers to pick up on.. :wink: