Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Gorbachev on
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I really like the first image...but what are those blocks in the picture?
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Gwil on
Tue Jun 22nd 2004 at 11:58pm
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Finger: i would have loved to enter the ms paint competition! i trust
you can use Wacom devices and the like? im going on holiday tomorrow
though, so will have to give it a miss :sad: never mind
"There are so many styles I like, that I flip flop alot between wanting
to do rough, impressionistic type work, and finer detailed stuff." - heh, i know that one
as for the concept sketches.. i like them - almost like a licker off
Resident Evil 2 meets toxic waste :razz: the skin needs more texture
though, even if it is a concept - scales? or even the slime/amphibious
approach would be good
Re: Recent WIP
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Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 12:40am
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I love the first and second pictures, such perfect examples of concept art. The first is particularly cool for the fact it gives such a clear example of the creatures form. In the second picture the creature is given a little more attitude and depth, but for some reason doesn't seem as impressive as the first. In this one it reminds me a lot of the walking fish creatures from Final Fantasy X, which is perhaps the reason I don't like it as much as it doesn't seem so original.
Regardless, great work, and the HL2 sketch is amazing considering the limitations though I personally don't rate it too highly if those limitations are ignored.
Re: Recent WIP
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I like the first one more than the second one. First one has a more consistent feel to it, kind of frog-like. Second one is good, but the feet and hands don't particularly look to be matching the rest of the concept. And geeze, you can do that in MSpaint?! I want a Wacom! :smile:
Re: Recent WIP
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Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 1:20am
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You're all right, the picture is definately evolving into something different than the original concept. I decided that I wanted to move away from the froglike, webbed feet, so I'm exploring some clawish stuff. Almost like a sloth mixed with a frog. He's not finished though, so we will see If I can pull the design together a little more. I find that rendering a drawing can easily kill the energy of the initial sketch, which has kind of happened here...hopefully I can regain some of that in the final rendering.
As for the mspaint drawig... lol, that was so aggrivating. There is no way to blend colors, or lower the brush opacity, so I just tried to do a crosshatchish blend of various solid colors. It was fun, but thank god we have advanced beyond mspaint.
Re: Recent WIP
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Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 5:55am
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Looking very, very good.
But yeh, what's the block on the sketch ?
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Finger on
Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 7:31am
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That block was just a photoshop brush I made, that I haven't erased yet. Cool thing about digital, is you can clean up any mess.
Re: Recent WIP
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Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 9:58am
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Really like the first one, everything looks just right. Easily as good as a lot of proffesional concept art I have seen.
I think your cross hatching works very well, but his eyes seem a tad big. Looking at the other entries, yours must have been in the top 3.
Re: Recent WIP
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Wed Jun 23rd 2004 at 4:04pm
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2<sup>nd</sup> one is fantastic :biggrin: The shadow and lighting is all done perfectly well. Got a good grasp on ye olde lighting techniques young padawan ;-)
Re: Recent WIP
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Ooh, I like the tail, kind of reminds me of a scorpion with a stinger at the end. I would make the spear shaft a little longer though to make it, more, um, spear-like. Nice work anyways. :smile:
Re: Recent WIP
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Sun Jul 4th 2004 at 1:19am
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Awesome work Finger, your ability to work with light and shadows always impresses me! It's an area I need to work at and improve myself.
Re: Recent WIP
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Sun Jul 4th 2004 at 1:32am
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The creature doesn't realy look intelligent enough to wield a spear.
Let's not get into how impossible it would be to effectively operate
one with two fingers and a thumb of sorts.
The creature itself is well drawn, like all your other work. I'd like to see how you imagine he'd move.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by ReNo on
Sun Jul 4th 2004 at 12:09pm
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Oooh I like the highlighting on that new one, really looks powerful and
bright and is possibly some of the most convincing recreations of
highlights I can recall seeing!
Considering the level of polish it has overall, I feel it looks a bit
rough around some edges. If you cleaned them up a little and made them
smoother, this could be of the sort of quality you'd expect on a book
cover or something.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Orpheus on
Mon Jul 5th 2004 at 8:05pm
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just an observation:
the environment of the area, looks detrimental to a reptile/amphibian master finger..
did you intend for it to look frigid?
/continues droolage.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by ReNo on
Mon Jul 5th 2004 at 8:41pm
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Wow, adding in the enviroment does loads for the picture. I'm
thoroughly impressed by this mate, definately the best I've seen from
you and thats no easy feat!
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Finger on
Mon Jul 5th 2004 at 9:03pm
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Thanks :dorky: . No Orph, I'm glad you pointed that out. It's hard to step back from your own creations, and critique them objectively.
Re: Recent WIP
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I really like the latest, very, very cool.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Ferret on
Mon Jul 5th 2004 at 10:59pm
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The polished look of the frog clashes with the harsh strokes of the environment.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Finger on
Mon Jul 5th 2004 at 11:32pm
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True, Ferret. Still very much a WIP, and I'll take Orphs's suggestions into consideration as I polish it out further.
Re: Recent WIP
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Tue Jul 6th 2004 at 10:42am
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i see some of my comments applied :biggrin:
nice..very nice.
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Finger on
Tue Jul 6th 2004 at 5:10pm
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Next? I think just more tightening and rendering...maybe a skewered snark on the end of his spear?
Re: Recent WIP
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Tue Jul 6th 2004 at 5:13pm
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I kinda liked the rocks having more definition as before, though they
certainly look more in tune with the style of the creature now. Perhaps
you could reach an equilibrium somehow, by making them a little more
sharp and defined?
The spear could use a fair bit of tidying but otherwise the creature looks pretty complete to me :smile:
Re: Recent WIP
Posted by Finger on
Tue Jul 6th 2004 at 6:13pm
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yeah, I already changed the foremost rock, and one in the background. One was too round, the other, too pointy.