I took a walk around alpha2.
Lighting has been greatly improved indeed, and as Captain P mentioned, there are several new cool spots and vistas.
Some of the narrow passages you have opened for the sake of gameflow still need some tweaking but I'm sure you'll get to that.
I know there are less dead ends now, but for me the map doesn't have a
clear set of paths I can choose from. I know there are a lot of ways to
play DM, but I usually do some sort of loop around the whole level. I
find it much more difficult with this map, but that's just a personal
opinion :smile:
The top floor (with the metal columns) still feels too big and
undefined. Could you transform it into some sort of office or
conference area? some textures and props would be enough, I think.
The city image below the map is a cool addition and enhances the
feeling of "huge" you get with this map. However, the light doesn't
match with the level's light_enviroment. Maybe you could replace it
with some satellite image of an industrial city (if the city is lit
because it is completely underground, forget this comment).
I had some visual issues while looking up at this spot >>
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5267/3006aja9.jpg
As you can see, there's a part of building that dissapears. Those walls
might also need some vent shafts like the ones you have further down
that area.
The electrical utility pole you have in the main area doesn't belong in
such a city, but you can keep it there if you want to :biggrin: Visually
it works.
The following is just a suggestion you can ignore if you wish to. As an
architecture student, the stairs you make look weird to me. I mean the ones
where you can see the steps underneath. If your stairs are made with
concrete structures, the steps would be built on top of a structure
such as this one [url]http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/9981/3006bei3.jpg [/url] You could
also change them to a metal structure in which the steps would be
thinner etc.
Anyway, not many people will worry about such things! :wink:
Great map so far. I have to say it again: It would be so cool watching combine troops rappeling down those shafts... :smile: