Dm_Cloudcity by MisterBister

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After about 14 months, the map is finally "finished".

For you guys who havent heard about the map before:
The map takes place in a futuristic city high enough to reach above the clouds.

One thing that i really miss is that very few people actually write stuff about how they did their maps, and how they thought when they did them. So I wrote one myself called "the story behind dm_cloudcity"

The textures is partially made by me, partially by Skurmedel, partially by Teddybear, partially by Valve, and partially by IZaNaGI.

Discussion

Posted by Dark|Killer on Mon Jan 30th 2006 at 12:06pm

No wonder why i love you that much...

lol, seriously, thats really one freakin attractive, lovely, pleasant, delightful, appealing, good-looking, lovely, gorgeous, stunning, striking, fine-looking, attractive, astonishing, astounding, remarkable, wonderful, incredible, startling, marvellous, miraculous, surprising, mind-blowing , mind-boggling , staggering
map i have seen these recent days, and i mean it...

Nice going bro, keep it up...( downloading it right now )

ps. arent these skybox-building textures, animated posters, and flying cars, as same as the ones in dm_neon ??

--anyway a really wonderful job you acheived :biggrin:
Posted by MisterBister on Mon Jan 30th 2006 at 8:16am
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Progress:
It has been a long time since i updated you with some pics, but now im here again.
Since the last update ive been working mainly on learning photoshop and adding colours to the map. Enough said, heres the images:

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First off is an overview. Ive lighten it up a bit and added more colour. Here you can also see the clouds ive been working with, however im havinga real hard time adding the same spritebased clouds in the 3D-sky. They just wont show up. Ive tried func_smokevolume aswell, but then i just get an error saying that the material hasnt been precached or something like that.

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An overview from another angle. The most notable thing is the blue and red screens, however ive also added two big holes on the "bridges".

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Same scene from another angle (again..). Here you can see some of the spotlights added in the 3D-sky aswell as ads in the 3D-sky. They will be replaced with something more appropriate in due time.

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Ive added the red area to make this tunnel more interesting. The crate textures is actually made by me aswell.

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Ive added some textures in here aswell. The crate textures are all made by me. Not the most pretty work you have seen i guess, but they work =P.

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Ive added the red area aswell. You can actually jump down there and get yourself healed and get armor with suitcharges. The bad thing is that people can easily drop down grenades when you heal up, and since its difficult to get out of that area you will probably get killed trying to get out of there if you are discovered.

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A pic of the 3D-sky. Ive added the glow to the lights aswell as new textures to the buildings.

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This area is shaping up pretty well. I dont remember showing a pic of this area until now.
Posted by DrGlass on Sun Jan 22nd 2006 at 10:58am

Check out pictures of real night time buildings, they arn't just white
holes. I would shoot for an animated texture that gave them a
VERY slight shimmer (too much would make all you buildings look like
they were moving around)
Posted by MisterBister on Sun Jan 22nd 2006 at 2:03am
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Progress:
Im currently working alot with textures and have given most of the map textures. However some areas, like the warehouse, is almost untouched at present. Im also experimenting with cratetextures that ive made. Perhaps ill keep them, perhaps not. Ive also added lots of small detail, and areas, that will increase the fun-factor. Im also working on the lighting to make it more colourful. Hopefully ill give you some images in about a week.
I love what you have done to the place. As for the ad. maybe you could use the heads from some smiling rebel girl models to make it more HL2'ish.
I dont intend to make the map HL2'ish.
somehow the windows in the skyscrapers seem too small to me, but maybe i'm not seeing the proportions right. In the 3rd pic, the stream of spaceships seems too non-random. maybe draw some spaceships in a different shape / color and unequally spaced apart. also dont forget to add some sort of (background/soft) noise for the stream of spaceships, would be weird without it i think. nice idea though, and idd cheap :smile: wonder how the effect ingame is.
Ive had lots of feedback regarding the windows (even from my girlfriend). Ill try to make new windows by myself which will variate more in colour and be more separated and detailed. Im trying to create spaceship-lanes, thats why they are so non-random.
Yeah, the windows do look too small, considering how close you are to the buildings. Try giving them "frames" and making them larger - and maybe even having a few more lights switched off?

Would it be possible to maybe have the ads on a billboard that floats? Little jets coming out the bottom, flips

over... that would look cool.
Ive been playing with of floating billboards, however im not sure if ill use them.. Ill have to do some more tweaking before i decide anything.
My favorite mp map is ofc_beach5, but I read some reviews that the textures looked off and that it was a rush job etc., with no consideration to how much fun it is. When you're running around a corner who cares if if a rock was used several times. Plus, the plethora of secret areas in the map always keeps you guessing. I don't care what chinese food looks like as long as it tastes good. Same with mapping. A map can look brilliant, but its not fun to play, who cares. I think there are 2 camps of critics, those that judge whether the visuals and theme really look nice, and those that are concerned with gameplay (and some of both I'm sure). Personally, I prefer the latter. I do have a lot of admiration for those that make maps look so professional though.
Well, I really prefer good gameplay. However, its not easy to have good gameplay when you have nobody who whats to test the map. Luckily, ive got my friends and we have been gametesting a few times. And its been real fun, Im adding elements to increase the fun-factor right now.
I love the way you are taking this map mate, it's feeling very grand and memorable already. As the others said, the windows could probably do with being a bit bigger, and the floating vehicles would be better if a bit more sporadic (I get that you may be going for the concept of "sky lanes" or the like, but the gaps between cars and the car variant layout is a bit too noticable uniform at the moment), but it's coming on very very nicely.
Thanks, as i said, im working on the windows. As for the spaceships, I don't agree.
Posted by ReNo on Thu Jan 19th 2006 at 5:57pm

I love the way you are taking this map mate, it's feeling very grand
and memorable already. As the others said, the windows could probably
do with being a bit bigger, and the floating vehicles would be better
if a bit more sporadic (I get that you may be going for the concept of
"sky lanes" or the like, but the gaps between cars and the car variant
layout is a bit too noticable uniform at the moment), but it's coming
on very very nicely.
Posted by jeffjohnvol on Thu Jan 19th 2006 at 4:29pm

<DIV class=quote>
<DIV class=quotetitle>? quoting Addicted to Morphine</DIV>
<DIV class=quotetext>MisterBister, thanks for sharing that article. I only got through part of it, but it was interesting.
</DIV></DIV>

I'm only partway through the article myself, and I agree with the author about gameplay trumping visuals.

My favorite mp map is ofc_beach5, but I read some reviews that the textures looked off and that it was a rush job etc., with no consideration to how much fun it is. When you're running around a corner who cares if if a rock was used several times. Plus, the plethora of secret areas in the map always keeps you guessing.

I don't care what chinese food looks like as long as it tastes good. Same with mapping. A map can look brilliant, but its not fun to play, who cares. I think there are 2 camps of critics, those that judge whether the visuals and theme really look nice, and those that are concerned with gameplay (and some of both I'm sure). Personally, I prefer the latter. I do have a lot of admiration for those that make maps look so professional though.
Posted by Gwil on Mon Jan 16th 2006 at 3:16pm

Yeah, the windows do look too small, considering how close you are to
the buildings. Try giving them "frames" and making them larger - and
maybe even having a few more lights switched off?

Would it be possible to maybe have the ads on a billboard that
floats? Little jets coming out the bottom, flips over... that would
look cool.
Posted by BlisTer on Sun Jan 15th 2006 at 2:50am

somehow the windows in the skyscrapers seem too small to me, but maybe i'm not seeing the proportions right. In the 3rd pic, the stream of spaceships seems too non-random. maybe draw some spaceships in a different shape / color and unequally spaced apart. also dont forget to add some sort of (background/soft) noise for the stream of spaceships, would be weird without it i think. nice idea though, and idd cheap :smile: wonder how the effect ingame is.
Posted by CooliO on Fri Jan 13th 2006 at 6:46pm

I love what you have done to the place. As for the ad. maybe you could
use the heads from some smiling rebel girl models to make it more
HL2'ish.
Posted by MisterBister on Fri Jan 13th 2006 at 1:31pm
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Right, time for an update.

Ive been mainly working on texturing, but also optimizing and some gameplay elements.
Ive got hold of Dm_neons textures and got permission from IZaNaGI to use them. Since they have a pretty special theme ill use them sparsly to avoid making my map looking like his.
Ive added some stuff that clearly gave the map a whole new look. ive also made one texture that fitted in the map, and im very proud of that after just a few weeks of training in photoshop =).

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In this image you can clearly see that windows has been added to the skyskrapers. Spaceships has been added which is a scrolling texture, a very cheap and cool looking solution. An Ad (Bistercola) has replaced Breen however it will probably be replaced or enhanced. Lots of textures has been added to this seen, however its pretty hard to detect.

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Same scene from another view. It looks much more detailed thanks to the textures.

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A view of some skyscrapers, you can clearly see the spaceships here aswell.

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An overview of the main battle area. Windows has been added to the building in the background, and as more detailed decals. You can see them if you look closely. Ads has been added by those found in Dm_neon. However ill probably change those aswell. Starwars stuff just doesnt fit..

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The warehouse part has been enhanced with more detail (the "elevators" with crates on them). Ive added a floor texture and other textures here and there.
Ive decided to make the crate textures myself, but I havent started doing them just yet.

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Inside the lab. More textures has been added, but no geometry. Ive got some ideas that im planning to ad, but that will come later on.

So, what do you guys think?
Feedback is appreciated, as always.